[OmegaZero_Alpha]

I am going to make a comic and then review it, just to kill some time


















Yeah, take that. That is my very first FORUMANIMANGA (anime manga posted in a forum) and a horrible one at that. Please post comments regarding:

-Storyline
-Artwork
-Timing
-Characterization
-other

MY REVEIW:

FUCKING AWEFUL!!!! Not only did I spend 4/6 frames trying to figure out what in the fuck was happening, but half of the frames that DID make sence weren't even in the same fucking setting!!! WHAT ARE THEY HAVING A TUG OF WAR THROUGH TIME AND SPACE!?!?! Not only that, but the entire thing was an unfunny joke with horrible timing, I mean, the author couldn't have just found another bleach character holding a rope? Or was the joke supposed to come from the randomness? In that case it only had a 2/31 chance of succeeding anyway. FAIL

[Drunken F00l]

The joke was ok. Did the artwork come from some show or did you make it all? I do agree with you about the differernt settings, though I do think you are a little hard on yourself.

[OmegaZero_Alpha]

All of the artwork (except for the chick in a different location) was from the anime BLEACH (the one I'm currently attached to). the chick was from a random google image search. I did use photoshop textures on the "sketchy" looking ones, I'm starting to get back into photoshop and textures are one of my weak points...

[Retribution]

lol those were not just form bleach, they were from the same episode XD

[larz]

from one of the lame fillers =/

[Retribution]

thats no filler, thats the ep before baldy releases his ban-kai 8O

[OmegaZero_Alpha]

yeah, it was actually from a major episode, it was where they were just allowed to release their power seals, Ikakku uses his bankai, and they all get pretty fucked up from the Arrancar.

[larz]

yeh, this comic blows more than a prostitute grandmother =/