My *Short* Film!

[Sleekgiant]

Im a student, granted not a film student, but there wasnt any criticism there at all. Thank you for the semi-pointless comment.

Want the truth

-terrible camera quality
-shit audio capture
-acting was average at best
-lighting is off for a poker scene(how many "dark" movies have poker games in brightly lit rooms)
-was so boooooring

Only good thing was the intro that you didn't make, so I stand behind what I originally said, don't quit your day job.

Who Jarateed in your cornflakes?

I'm always an asshole

[vipersnake52]

Dont be assholes guys, atleast he tried.
Ill get my real life amnesia film onto youtube that i made a week ago for school media ;D
Its so shit!

PS: Intro's are cool, but generally at the start of short films, arent always needed.

[noodl3boi]

I think i've been playing a bit too much online poker because the ending freaked me out a bit

And a couple of things:

Yes, the voice-overs needed a bit more 'work' as has been mentioned above

Well that was one thing...

Overall, I liked it! Nice job

[SnorlaxTheAtlantian]

I actually liked it. Acting was a bit meh-ish but hey thats how students are. Good work though.

[cuddletime]

I actually liked it. Acting was a bit meh-ish but hey thats how students are. Good work though.

Thanks!

[Meaty]

I'm sure you worked hard on it and had lots of fun doing it

[hsn620707]

Enjoy!
This is not spam! I really did write, direct, and somewhat star in this film!
Any and all complements and criticisms are welcome!

Link:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bl_I7Te9QMY

Dont forget to Like/Subscribe!

Nice

i think.

[Teeird]

I liked it a lot, and deserves more than 200 views.

[cuddletime]

I liked it a lot, and deserves more than 200 views.

Thanks

[Stagi3rFall]

It does deserve more views! Good video! Subscribed :]

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